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  • akasagarbha

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    Oh God, Fatma.
    This broke my heart to read...
    But it was - like Isa said - so pure and emotional, that it's impossible to not love it.

    You will heal soon. Whether it be tomorrow or next month or even in eleven months. But things will get better someday...

    Know that they love you. They wouldn't want you feeling this way.
    They love you. They're here for you, though not physically, they're still right beside you...

    Keep the faith, sweetheart.
    :arms:
    February 10th, 2008 at 12:08am
  • The Way

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    Fatma...
    That was utter purity. Perfection and reality and emotion, woven into one by your words.

    It's hard to overcome.
    Sometimes I feel it too. More than I'd prefer or like to admit.
    I miss them too much.
    Love them too much.

    They hold a place in my heart and they're fighting to keep their place and stay there.

    The break will heal in time. You may not believe me but the sight of them a few feet away from you, with thousands booming their words, the music alive and whole, and you will feel like even if things won't be okay in the future, you'll have that moment to hold on to.

    Keep the faith, Fatma.
    :arms:
    February 7th, 2008 at 03:49pm
  • opium den mother.

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    I love this Fatma.
    Even though I know what it means.
    I can feel it.
    I really do.
    February 7th, 2008 at 10:36am
  • Sheepy

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    I wish I could say more than this. That I could point out every masterstroke of perfection in this, every sign of a perfectly formed emotion, but I'm not sure it's possible.
    It's you. Or at least, that's what it feels like.
    It feels like it's part of your soul, placed on the internet for people to admire, loathe, criticise, praise; whatever they feel like.
    In the end, that's all you can ever expect, because at least for you, words will never reflect or describe the emotion that's bleeding through that page, like they are on that cloud.
    Noweher near it.
    Because it's just emotion, pure and exposed, and it's hit me right in the heart. Bang. It might be just because it's been one of those emotional days, but I think this will have the same effect on anyone who reads this. Because it's just so powerful. So emotional.
    Because every single inch of this feels so real.
    Thank you, so much, for posting this.
    February 6th, 2008 at 10:55pm
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