I tied the rope around my neck - Comments

wow

that made me cry

so real

so easy to relate to

depending upon one's circumstances of course

hmmmmmm

keep going

i would love to hear it progress

xD!!

i really really liked this. It was beautifly written, and i liked the little band references in there. it was amazing how you made it seem so real, so raw. great work.
and btw song emotionless, makes me cry...it was a good one to use for the dad.
xoxoxoxoxoxo
jen

Oh yea I'm dedicated in this thing!!! OH YEAAA!!!!!!!
...*sniffles* I'm having a moment *sniffles*....

that was sad ;-;

nice; i liked it. :]