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  • robbsdead

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    This story was so beautiful and full of feeling and emotion.
    I loved it.
    January 15th, 2012 at 03:11pm
  • BlackParadeEndlessly

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    Awwwww! I loved this! It was so painful and sweet! You're an awesome writer, seriously!

    -- Bliss
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:49am
  • Iero My Hero.

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    I love Mikey so much, so it's really sad to know that he went through such a horrible depression.
    I'm really glad Gerard was there for him, both in the story and in real life.

    "It's okay to feel weak sometimes, and it's okay to feel lost," Gerard reassured him, because he felt he had to say it. "But Mikey," Gerard pleaded, kissing his lips and running his hands up and down Mikey's upper arms. "Please let me save you."

    Best bit, right there.
    D'awweh, this was adorable.

    Great work, hon.
    June 2nd, 2011 at 09:18am
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    I absolutely adore how you started off the story with And. I love sentences like that, for some reason. (: That entire first paragraph was so lovely and so damn sensual. Just the physical description was just so wonderful.

    This was beautiful. Absolutely fucking beautiful. I know I've told you this many times before but you capture emotion so, so well. This entire piece, my heart absolutely ached for Gerard and I actually almost started to cry when he started to cry. I could feel just how much he truly loved Mikey and I could feel all of his anguish.

    Just that snapshot of a moment, that intense, pure love and the pain of two lost souls tied together, it was something worth having. It was everything worth having. It was something to live for. That was my absolute favorite line. It isn't just true about Mikey and Gerard, its totally true about life in general. I want that person, that one person who keeps me alive.

    Some people might say that this is wrong because this is Waycest, but you know what? Screw them because this is quite possibly one of the most beautiful things I've ever read on this site. Thank you so much for being an author, you beautiful person. <3
    June 1st, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • murderdolls_queen

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    I loved it! It was so sweet and full of emotion! As per usual lol.

    BB: and felt his heart feel twice as solid, twice as warm, and twice as purposeful.
    June 1st, 2011 at 08:04am
  • xxfrankysangelxx

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    i dont have a clue what 2 say but it was amazing and i loved every second of it ......thank you :) x
    May 30th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • Michael James Way.

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    BABY, WILL YOU MARRY ME AGAIN?
    THIS IS THE KIND OF SHIT WE'RE GOING TO READ TO OUR ADOPTED CAMBODIAN PUPPIES WHEN WE TUCK THEM IN AT NIGHT BECAUSE IT'S FUCKING PRETTY.
    ALSO I HAVE A CHOCOLATE MILKSHAKE RIGHT NOW BECAUSE IT'S 70 DEGREES OUTSIDE, BUT I WOULD GIVE YOU ALL THE CHOCOLATE MILKSHAKES IN THE WORLD IF YOU WANTED. <3
    May 20th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • Michael James Way.

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    I don't understand why there are no comments on this yet.
    I found this fucking beautiful, the ending especially.
    I tend to dabble *cough* in waycest, and I found your take on their relationship very heartfelt and real.
    Oh, and this line?
    "I never thought I'd say it but I am, I'm so fucking scared. I'm terrified of waking up one day and you not being there"
    I admit it, I teared up a little bit.
    Great job!
    May 20th, 2011 at 03:29am