I really like the jist of this entire story, and how she isn't really relying on James. I like that they started on a bad note, and that James is trying to make up for it. I really like that she's doing this all for a good cause too, to help her cousin out. Unique and adorable little read!
Because I have an undying obsession with Carlos could maybe have a cameo with his super jot girlfriend name Tia? I lobe Daniella she seems like the girl who would rather be in a ramones shirt than a tank top and I respect that.
I like the start of this so far. I also love the picture you chose for your layout. Kendall looks totally distracted and James looks so freaking adorable lol.
I just have to say, you might want to go back and edit some because there were some words missing. But other than that, I can tell this is going to be an intersting story (in a good way) lol. Keep it up! =)