This story is really amazing. I dont know much about bi time rush and i like that I dont have to be a die hard fan to read this. It is really well written and interesting! Like previouse comments I liked the use of anatomy, it made it so this isnt just about sex it has more feeling and relism too it. I always get nervouse with comment swap becuase of some of the stories on here are not interesting but im glad I got one that is interesting and unique. Im also a big one shot fan so keep up the good work You are really talented.
Excuse my ignorance in the fact that I am not a fan of Big Time Rush and I would genuinely have no clue who Logan Mitchell was if he passed me in the street! (not that it is ever likely to happen as I live in Narnia!) However, I really like the way you worked the plot and to diminish any preconceived ideas I had about Big Time Rush, I treated this as an original fiction. The whole 'anatomy' thing just made this whole story even more interesting to read! Fantastically written! xx
This was interesting...I dont really like oneshots like this nor do I like Big Time Rush so it was a new experience for me from the beginning. I didn't see any major grammatical errors and it was an easy read... keep writing :)
I'm gonna start off by saying that I'm not really a fan of BTR fanfics, mainly because I don't really like BTR. Boy bands aren't my thing. But I actually liked this oneshot because of the twist you put on the plot. The focus wasn't so much on the fandom as it was on other things. And I really liked the whole "anatomy" thing, because I'm a pre-med major and that kind of stuff just fascinates me. Anyway, great job! I really liked this oneshot :)