Thank you for the comment! :) The hints were helpful, and i am re-editing most of it, so it's gunna have a change, Thanks for taking the time to read it <3
July 13th, 2012 at 08:25pm
Good story so far!
Some hints though:
When you do paragraphs, try and put spaces between each one, it makes it easier to read.
Also, I would recommend going back and fixing the grammatical errors in your summary. People may not want to read because it's got a lot of errors.
Good luck with your story! :)