Sunburn - Comments

this is cool.
sorry i haven't read it sooner.

he, me likey.that emo chick seems scary.

I liked this. You get see Matthew and Jessica kinda connect more. (: You know what's funny...while iI was reading this chapter ,a MCR song was playing on my Ipod, then a Jonas Brothers song came on.. That's really freaky.. Anyway yes, I am your second subscriber! :D Can't wait until the next update.

cool, sorry i haven't been on .
exams ...i'm actually sneaking this in since i'm s'pose to be studying.
it's cool and funny, i was laughing my butt off.
and the layout looks much better now.

I love this.. I'm really curious as to what is up with Jessica. (: Update soon.

i like how you said that his mother was secretly cackling...it was hilarious.
cool update...anticipating.

its a cool story with a wonderful plot. but the only thing is the layout kinda throws you off... but its a really cool story and i sure as hell like it.