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I've never read hockey fan-fiction before so I didn't really know much about this, but it was something different so that was good. The characters were also humorous and the story itself was interesting. Nice story!

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Originally I didn't understand that this was about hockey, but that's probably because I'm from Australia so I've never heard of the team before. I've never read a story about any sports before so it's really opened my eyes to the genre. I thoroughly enjoyed reading something different than my usual taste, and I think you're a very good writer because you managed to make this interesting for someone like me who hates sports!

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I don't watch hockey so I have no idea who these people are but that doesn't really matter. I actually really enjoyed this. It's very humorous. Jean is one jam-packed chick. I like that. I also love the guy's nicknames. They're hilarious.

Okay, so.

I'm still sort of lost, but whatever. It waas well written but the layout can be better. Everything from the color of the background, the font, it's just really harsh. I don't know anything about sports but I'm sure this Jean girl is like- a badass cause she does everything. And I also enjoy the blackhawks too so good job. maybe change the layout but good work.

Let me just start on with saying that the layout color - the bright red - made it hard for me to read the font because it was, well, hard on my eyes. With that said I also don't know a thing about sports so I was completely lost when you were talking about the "Thrashers" during the first chapter and some other places, but it is well written and pretty good. Keep writing and I wish you the best of luck.

-Greg.

This story was really interesting!
I've never read anything like it!
Jean was definitely a Jack of all trades, almost to the point that it was annoying. It's nice to see characters that are good at something, but when they're good at everything, it gets to be overwhelming.
The story was really good though and I think you're a good writer!

This is a very very interesting idea for a story, I would have never thought to write about wrestling or any sport or anything for that matter. Very good idea! I think this is a pretty good story, I like reading. John Cena is one of the wrestlers I actually know, so it was drawing me in the first moment I read the summary to your story. You should write more. Keep up the good work! Nice story!!!!! :)

Wow! I was so shocked when I came across this! I used to be an absolutely HUGE WWE fan - John Cena and Jeff Hardy being my favourites! I had no idea that people actually wrote fan fiction in this genre, so I was pleasantly surprised! It feels like a blast from the past! I really love your writing style - it's simplistic with just the right amount of everything! I hate it when people over-complicate their fics! Keep it up! xx

OMG. I'm a big WWE fan too! Love your story! :)

I love this story! I cannot stop reading it, you need to write more!