This is brilliant and perfectly written, one of the best things I have ever read on Mibba. Jack is such a perfect character, his social commentary is to say the least fucking fascinating as hell. It is so wonderful to have a main character that isn't just a boring "sit and watch as everything fucks him in the face" type. I love that he is flawed! The storyline so far is so totally unique as well, I mean boy seeks enigmatic girl has been done, but not like this. I love the pieces of insight that seep in from Jack's future self, and I sense that this nameless girl is going to be far less than the super human he has her pegged as in his mind. What a brilliant concept. Please update soon.
Aston the Owl