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  • aiyanamama

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    This was sweet. I love that you end it with the sugary "I will come back" feeling we all would get, whether we'd admit it or not. A very satisfying romance. Aren't sparrows known for flying for long periods of time? So when it's time she can fly that long distance and find her man, just like the sparrow represented on her necklace. (:

    On a scale one to five, one being "ew take this down" and five being "WOWW!", I rate Soul of Your Skin at 3.9.
    June 27th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • dirt whispered.

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    ^I agree. This was extremely cute. It was a simple delve into a pivotal moment in two people's lives. You made me want to know more about them and their relationship; how they met, their past, where they would end up; their future. Very well written. Good job!
    May 5th, 2011 at 02:28pm
  • the fallen.

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    tehe This was really cute.
    You captured Carlos's innocence really well.

    I enjoyed this a lot. Cute
    April 30th, 2011 at 06:46pm
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