When Keeping It Real Goes Wrong. - Comments

cute

So sad to see it end, but I adored it.
More Matt? That would be wonderful.
Also, I completely agree with not posting pictures of characters. I've lost interest so many times from seeing what a main character was meant to be, when I had somethin completely different in mind.

Cute ending thank you so much:D

This is such a sweet story, all guys should act like your Matt :)
I'm sad to see it end, but very excited to read chapter 13.

Love the story so far!!!! Can you upload a picture of what Madelynn looks like?? And can she be something other than Caucasian?? Not to offend anyone. Like African-American? Or Hispanic? Asian? Native American?

Ahh!! He needs to tell her

I don't want it to end

Why can't she just except the point that she does like Matt
Thanx for the update

This is so damn cute !

awwww
SHE'S BLIND

Awesome update thank you
This chapter is cute

Make her love him haha
<3

I love this story. It's AW-mazing. Pwease continue. <3

There's not enough matt stories out there...I love this :D

awww
<3

Oh snap. She just grabbed him. Niiice. haha No seriously the woman is dense to not know where the convo was getting at. tsk tsk

Aaaah! They just kissed. So I guess staying with Jona has it's advantages. For example, escaping the post-kiss awkwardness. She's clueless and his mixed up but otherwise still has a clue to what he's feeling.

Now to predict the awkward post-kiss conversation and a hasty exit. Oh boy! I can feel the storm brewing. dun dun dun

Update soon!!!

They KISSED!! Awesome!!
Thanx for the update

OH THEY KIIIISSED <3

This is too fucking cute c:

Ooooh! I see something a comin' around the corner...dun dun dun. And the moment is ruined by them just barging in.

Them on the floor though was kinda cute. Okay fine you caught me. It's was absolutely adorable. No need to shake the truth out of me. Geezus!

Funny what Oli insinuated could be a possibility. haha I laughed a little. Nothing like a little foreshadowing.

Oh and seriously she can't be too dense to what he is trying to subtly refer to, geezus woman!

Anyways...update soon!!!