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  • EmptyInside

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    cute
    November 23rd, 2011 at 12:33pm
  • jessisamess

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    So sad to see it end, but I adored it.
    More Matt? That would be wonderful.
    Also, I completely agree with not posting pictures of characters. I've lost interest so many times from seeing what a main character was meant to be, when I had somethin completely different in mind.
    May 21st, 2011 at 06:51am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Cute ending thank you so much:D
    May 21st, 2011 at 04:49am
  • jessisamess

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    This is such a sweet story, all guys should act like your Matt :)
    I'm sad to see it end, but very excited to read chapter 13.
    May 20th, 2011 at 02:52pm
  • kaleidoscop3eyes.

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    Love the story so far!!!! Can you upload a picture of what Madelynn looks like?? And can she be something other than Caucasian?? Not to offend anyone. Like African-American? Or Hispanic? Asian? Native American?
    May 20th, 2011 at 02:33am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Ahh!! He needs to tell her
    May 19th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • Confide.

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    I don't want it to end
    May 18th, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Why can't she just except the point that she does like Matt
    Thanx for the update
    May 18th, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • jessisamess

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    This is so damn cute !
    May 17th, 2011 at 05:52pm
  • Confide.

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    awwww
    SHE'S BLIND
    May 17th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Awesome update thank you
    This chapter is cute
    May 16th, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • Confide.

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    Make her love him haha
    <3
    May 15th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • DeadDaydreamer

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    I love this story. It's AW-mazing. Pwease continue. <3
    May 13th, 2011 at 08:12pm
  • jessisamess

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    There's not enough matt stories out there...I love this :D
    May 10th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • Confide.

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    awww
    <3
    May 10th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • nessajc

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    Oh snap. She just grabbed him. Niiice. haha No seriously the woman is dense to not know where the convo was getting at. tsk tsk

    Aaaah! They just kissed. So I guess staying with Jona has it's advantages. For example, escaping the post-kiss awkwardness. She's clueless and his mixed up but otherwise still has a clue to what he's feeling.

    Now to predict the awkward post-kiss conversation and a hasty exit. Oh boy! I can feel the storm brewing. dun dun dun

    Update soon!!!
    May 10th, 2011 at 01:15am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    They KISSED!! Awesome!!
    Thanx for the update
    May 9th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • MforMaeri

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    OH THEY KIIIISSED <3
    May 9th, 2011 at 09:03pm
  • Confide.

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    This is too fucking cute c:
    May 9th, 2011 at 02:59pm
  • nessajc

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    Ooooh! I see something a comin' around the corner...dun dun dun. And the moment is ruined by them just barging in.

    Them on the floor though was kinda cute. Okay fine you caught me. It's was absolutely adorable. No need to shake the truth out of me. Geezus!

    Funny what Oli insinuated could be a possibility. haha I laughed a little. Nothing like a little foreshadowing.

    Oh and seriously she can't be too dense to what he is trying to subtly refer to, geezus woman!

    Anyways...update soon!!!
    May 8th, 2011 at 10:10am
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