Relief - Comments

First off, thank you for entering this in my contest! I really liked the layout; it was simple but not too simple, if that makes sense. I also love how your summary was kind of your chapter title; that was really neat and it definitely piqued my attention!

Right off the bat, this was incredibly sexy. I love how you mixed the smut together seamlessly with your description; it didn't just seem like a PWP piece, there was definitely meaning behind it. This entire piece was incredibly sexy; this is probably the best piece of smut that I've read in a long time. You managed to convey the sheer anger and tension running through both men without overdoing it, if that makes sense. I loved the ending too; it was quite cheeky. This was very well written and I'd like to thank you for entering it in my contest! :D

WHY DO NONE OF THESE HAVE A MILLION COMMENTS YET OMG
Wow. Soo, my mind is not coherent right now. That was hot. Like, inferno of fiery lava, surface of the sun and hell hot.
Hold on, just let me get my composure back here -ahem- it's been like five minutes, I give up xD
It's hard to find words for something like this besides marvelous and, well, hot. In all honesty, your writing is beautiful,
and when you couple it with an idea like this, you are bound to come out with magic. Which is exactly what happened.
You blew my mind with every sentence, and it was just dskgjnkaslk Congrats. You broke me :)