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  • release-the-bats

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    I really like this. Can't wait for more.
    May 28th, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • coolchessplayer

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    Woah! Frank needs to try to get things from lil's point of view I'm thinking they should talk!
    May 23rd, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • santi santi

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    Frankie needs to calm down and let Lil do what she needs to. I know he wants to help, but geez, let the girl try some other things first.
    May 23rd, 2011 at 08:33pm
  • coolchessplayer

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    OH MY FUCKING GOD I LOVE YOU!!!! THANKYOU FOR UPDATING I WORSHIP YOU AND I'M YOUR SLAVE!!!!
    May 21st, 2011 at 03:37am
  • santi santi

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    Frank is too much I love him for it :)
    May 20th, 2011 at 09:52pm
  • coolchessplayer

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    Yes frank is a freaking steal i wanna nom nom on him!!! hmmmhhhmmm yum! ;D
    May 17th, 2011 at 08:27am
  • santi santi

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    Frank is the greatest, freaking love him!
    May 17th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • Venganza!

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    Haha Frank really is nom ;)

    I love this story darling and cannot wait for more to come!! ^_^
    May 16th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • santi santi

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    I really like Frank, he's so nice and considerate! Love it!
    May 14th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • santi santi

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    Frank is so nice, I'm glad he's such a good person and helping Lil. I guess I would be thy way too if someone I could've helped committed suicide.
    I can't wait for more!
    May 10th, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • santi santi

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    Should I be worried about Frankie?
    May 9th, 2011 at 11:17pm
  • imNotOkayTrustMe17

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    i love this!!! keep updating!
    May 9th, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • Venganza!

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    Hehe I loved this chapter and Frank is so sweet and awkward I love it!! ^_^
    May 9th, 2011 at 07:45pm
  • Vanilla Beatnik

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    I like this. It's not pretentious, like a lot of "OMG GIRL WHO IZS LEIK A SEX WERKER INNIT" stories are. Frank's characterised really well, sweet and clever (like I have a suspicion he is in reality) and Liliana/Heather isn't a prick- she's clever and collected and has a wealth of human emotions on display. :) *subscribing*
    May 9th, 2011 at 12:14am
  • santi santi

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    I'm really starting to like this! I can't wait to see what happens next; they're so cute when they talk to each other, they're both so shy and awkward
    May 3rd, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • PinkRabbit

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    Love it!! hehe, 'john' eh? XD x
    May 2nd, 2011 at 01:36am
  • Venganza!

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    This sounds really interesting darling!! Actually I like all your stories so I'm following this one too ^_^
    April 30th, 2011 at 09:28pm
  • coolchessplayer

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    I actually really like the idea, other stripper stories or things like this are uncomplete and don't really show emotion or tell a story. When you write i feel as if i'm getting to know the person.
    April 30th, 2011 at 09:26pm
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