Finding Her Justice - Comments

Well thanks! I think I got down her pain just right because me and her are really best friends in real life and we know how it would be without eachother

i really like it. it has a good plot line and well its just really good i actually have a feeling of grief like you can tell how they all feel it's not like oh i think shes sad like you know whats going on:)

Thank you(:

This is a good plot line. And a good start. Keep writing :)