Chalk & Wood - Comments

I read this once before and I thought I'd left a comment on it, but apparently not.

I adored this. Really, so much. It was so beautifully written and flowed so well. I had tears in my eyes while I read it, the emotions were written so well and the narrative was so perfect and sweet. I also loved the layout and I thought it was really nice and fit well with the story. I also thought the lack of names made it that extra bit more powerful and moving, it gave the impression that it could be anybody and fit in to anything.
So the instant the rain banged against the wood, harder than every before, he stopped hesitating. ~ I think this line was one of my favourites, it was just so sweet and adorable, it summed up the whole story to me, I love love loved it.

You know me and how I really do not like fluffy stories; however, this was so beautifully written. The imagery is so vivid and lovely, going perfectly with the general theme and feeling the story gives.

I really liked how you decided to experiment with this change of perspective, jumping from him to her between each paragraph; you succeeded in balancing the story between the two of them and in bringing both perspectives together and ending the story in such a happy way.

I also liked the lack of dialogue, which works perfectly with the narration style you used.

I'm not gonna lie, I cried while reading, because it was just so sweet and cute that I just couldn't handle. I really liked it a lot and enjoyed reading through it, and it's a plus that you have such a lovely layout and a banner that fits with the story.

That was positively lovely. Your use of imagery is fantastic; there were moments when I got sucked in and felt like I was there. And I liked the ending very much. :3 Keep on a-writin'!