In the Background - Comments

Awesome story. Hope there's more soon

Love it :D

I know it probably doesn't mean a lot from a complete stranger, but I'm really sorry to hear about your house
Take all the time you need :D
and I can't wait to hear mote of this when you are ready to update

I liked it, I don't mind waiting, it just makes things just more interesting.

I still love this. Chapter 13 and 14 where pretty cool.

I just got around to reading this story. I like it. Keep writing.

men and their video games - tut tut :D Can't wait for the next update ;p

Love this story can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

Jimmy needs to get his head out of his ass.
I love this story(:
It's really good, and keeps me wanting to know what happens next!
I can't wait for the next update(:

loved it and i cant believe jimmy he is totally actin not himself his stupid girlfriend is changing him an for the worst he totally went over the line when he yelled at kim poor kimmy i hope it doesnt get worse with him UPDATTTEE soon pllllleeeeaaassssseeeeeeee!XD

Jimmy is an asshole he needs to come back to earth from Jamie land

loved it :)

Jimmy's being a bastard, Noelle should slap him :P Update soon please <3

this is really enjoyable, please update soon <3

I haven't comment before but your story is pretty cool I love it. This is one of my favorite stories now

Can't wait for an update!!!! Loved the last chapter!

Hi
Your story would be really, really great... But your spelling and grammar is killing me. I know, it sounds like I'm being a huge bitch but it really annoys me... Sorry. But all you have to do is just fix it up a little and it will be amazing, trust me.
:)

I liked it. :)

Quick correction though. Once again you messed up on they're vs there but for the most part I didn't see any big errors.

I liked this chapter and I'm glad Matt's going to help her but I did notice two small spelling errors.

"I began to pounder if I really did like Jimmy." The word is 'ponder' and although pounder isn't a word, it looks insanely awkward. I'm immature.

"I layed my head on Matt's shoulder." It's 'laid'. Confusing? A little bit but that's how it's spelled. lol

This is now my new all time favorite story can't wait for the next chapter to come out :)

Your writing has definitely improved. :) I'm excited and I enjoyed the chapter!

As for corrections, I'm really shit at explaining how to place commas, but the easiest way I can explain how to get MOST of them right is just to tell you to place them where you feel you'd naturally take a break or pause in the sentence. It won't give you 100% perfect grammar when it comes to commas, but it'll take care of MOST of them.

Oh and I'm not sure if you meant for Noelle and Ashley's outfit link to be the exact same polyvore outfit, since I do know that you said the outfits were similar but I just wanted to double check. xD