Your gonna think im a massive freak, but im a massive fan of short stack and this story. I love this story so much, it has an amazing storyline and im a sucker for a good love story. Well done, keep it up. I cant wait for the next chapter
i think this story is starting out nicely :D don't scrap it, keep going. just make sure you have at least a bit of an idea on where the story is going and it will turn oiut great :D good job.