The Pursuit of Sarah Alice - Comments

I'm liking this story. The only problem is that I couldn't get past chapter two because of the lightness of the font color. It's hard for my eyes to adjust to it and I have to squint which gives me a headache.

But good job on the chapters that I have read!

Like the user below me, I'm curious where this story is taking place. I have an idea with the accent, but it's not stated (that I see) - and therefore, I don't want to comment particularly about that yet, aha.

Anyway, I like this, and I'm subbing. :)

Hiii, I just wanted to let you know I really really love this! I just have one question: where are they all from? You mentioned the characters have an accent but I can't figure out what it is, haha. But I love this and I hope you update soon!!

green apple blow pops are my faVORITE
AND THE GRAPE ONES
but i actually like green apple better
i can't imagine Jolie being mature enough to actually say penis ehehehehe
oh goodness gracious, Link is absolutely adorable
tbh it's not really a favorite line, per say, but i loved the part when Link hiccuped (((((:
AND UH HELLO OF COURSE MY FAVORITE CHARACTER IS LINK

IS YOU OKAY IS YOU GOOD CAUSE I WANTED TO KNOW
i'm sorry i had to say that okay i just had to it came out and i just okay bye
OH MY GOD
FLOCKA
BRB I'M DYING OMFG
ooooooh shit he thinks you sometin' awesome
SHIPPING IT

This is just so real. It's rare that I stumble upon a story here that has such a lifelike quality to it that I can picture everything happening somewhere in the world, and by golly, this story is one of them. Everything about it is so realistic - from the characters and their personalities to their accents and the way they interact. The point is, this is awesome and you're hella talented and I hope awesome things happen to Sarah Alice because I haven't simultaneously laughed with and empathized with a protagonist like her in a long time. Keep up the awesomeness! :)

I want more!

omg i didn't even know what a seven letter word for bad news was is that bad
HOW CAN IT BE TIGHT ON HER
SHE'S BASICALLY SKIN ON BONES
"my legs still jiggled" girl shhh you're perfect ok
LINK
YOU'RE HOT
GOODBYE
girl, don't even be ashamed of the fries
everyone splurges on those fries
what's BETTER is In 'N Out fries
by god, those things are magic

IT'S OKAY ESSAY
lol that rhymed
LINK IS VERY ATTRACTIVE
IT'S NATURAL FOR FIRST TIMERS TO BE STUNNED MY HIS CHARMINGLY ANNOYING GOOD LOOKS

UH OH
THE END OF THAT UPDATE DIDN'T SUGGEST ANY HAPPY ENDING

MEEPS

NONONONONONONO CAROLINAAAAA :(((((((

oh my gosh this is absolutely hilarious AHAHAHAHAHA
Kenna freaks me out tho jussayin' y'all.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON BBZ C:

FLOCKA
OH MY GOD RACQUE
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
YOU ARE MY IDOL
what even
WHAT EVEN
/dead

I really like orange juices, too :c
SARAH ALICE IS THE ODD ONE

PLEASE UPDATE SOON QRL.<3
luv yew~

BTDUBS THIS CHAP WAS AMAYZINGAAAAAAAAAA.

Wow, I really love this story especially because tiny seems like a real person. She has problems, personality, and just acts a lot like me. Like I do the exact same thing around guys that she does around Link (a.k.a. act like a jerk/indifferent idiot) and we both aren't super social people. I feel like I can really relate to her :)

DUDE
JESUS CHRIST, TINY HAS SOME LEGIT PROBLEMS
AND LINK IS JUST SO PERFECT OH MUH GAH.
I'm fangirling so hard right now, Racque, I really am. seriously.<3 WHY ARE YOU SUCH AN AMAZING AUTHOR.
this is so wonderful and beautiful and seriously.
I really just wanna see this published and we're only three chapters in.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON C:

Thais is great!!!! Keep updating pretty pretty please!! I can't believe how great this is. I love your writing style!

Link Larkin.
that's literally all I can think about now, ahaha(:
IT'S STILL JUST AS AMAZING AS WHEN I READ IT ON FICTIONPRESS.<3
please update soon? c;

North Carolina.
that was amazing.
I love it so much.
I love how bitchy she's being about how she's so "all knowing" about life and shit.
lub yew qrl.
please update soon? c:

p.s. I subscribed.

Carolina. this story looks so beautiful.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO START IT EVERYTHING IS PERFECT. c: