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  • TheGoodLlama

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    Ugh, i love this story.
    June 27th, 2012 at 06:32pm
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Really liked this chapter! Thanks fort he update.
    June 19th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    AAAAAAH. UPDATE SOON. I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:45pm
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    ahhhh, fuck. "Clearly," he whispered, pressing his lips onto my jaw. I could feel his ugly smile. He kissed my lips next. "Clearly, I am the man of your dreams." That part KILLED me. I loved that so much. Can't wait til your next update!
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    I want the old Mibba back. I hate the new one. UPDATE SOON. I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.
    June 1st, 2012 at 11:39pm
  • ChoukoxMonster

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    I just jumped on to this story and I think you're doing a great job! It's enjoyable, suspenseful, and you still capture that essence of madness without it seeming ridiculous. Keep up the good work!
    May 29th, 2012 at 06:42pm
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    God damn it. I was so close to crying during the end. Ugh, I love this so much. Holy shit, and I really hope Johnny's okay. I wouldn't think that they'd kill him off so easily though.

    Sorry for not commenting. >.< I didn't get the chapter update for some reason.
    May 22nd, 2012 at 02:03am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    so good, thanks for the update!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 01:35am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    GASP. JOHNNY. AAAAAAAAHHHHH.
    UPDATE SOON!
    Hope you enjoyed college! xD
    May 16th, 2012 at 08:18am
  • jskars

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    Omg! I hope he makes it out and come back with help
    March 15th, 2012 at 07:53am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Whoop an update!!
    I don't like Joey but he doesn't actually deserve to die so in a way I'm glad you kept him.
    Update soon!!
    March 12th, 2012 at 08:36am
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    I forgot how much I love this story. :3 Gah JOEEYYYYY! I can't help but feel that it's not going to work. I dunno. The pessimistic side of me says no, the positive side says yes. :( I really hope he survives though. He doesn't deserve to die. I can't wait til your next update!
    March 12th, 2012 at 01:26am
  • elyn14

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    Yaaay! Ur back lol can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)
    March 12th, 2012 at 12:07am
  • SynysterGatesIsMine

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    THIS STORY IS SO DAMN AMAZING!!!!!!!
    Update soon, please?? :)
    February 7th, 2012 at 03:56am
  • jskars

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    I'm pretty sure Charity will kick some ass in the chapters to come!
    January 24th, 2012 at 08:29am
  • Hey It's Frankie

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    Loved it! Poor Charity though =/
    WONDER WHAT THEY'LL DO TO HER!
    January 21st, 2012 at 07:45pm
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    Aw fuck. The way he said that, how he couldn't understand how a man could hurt a woman, shows how totally fucked up he's become.

    I don't know how I'll survive without this story, even if it is for a few weeks. :( loved it.
    January 21st, 2012 at 07:31am
  • DancinginYourPoison

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    I absolutely love this story, it's amazing. Usually it's difficult to make a sequel to a story AND make it interesting, but you're great at it! Haha :D
    January 21st, 2012 at 06:06am
  • Anvampfreak

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    >:D Ha--take that Matt ^^ Charity ain't givin' up. Sad you're going back to school >..> Less updates---but you have a life xD Wish you luck with ur boy dilemna -___- I feel your pain. :D Awesome update by thee way!
    January 21st, 2012 at 05:01am
  • jskars

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    I doubt she'll make it to the phone, but If she does then I guess I was wrong lol
    January 8th, 2012 at 06:10am
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