As the Leaves Change in Color - Comments

I absolutly love love love this story ur doing an amazing job on it. :D

"It was freezing outside. I walked out and I thought the snot inside my nose would turn to snotsicles. I bet that would be painful. I know, I know, it's a cruddy way of telling you how cold it was outside. But it's kind of amusing, right?"

Oh hell yes it was amusing, This part just made me giggle stupidly to myself.

"I dare you to walk into Walmart, in drag. Then, go jack the television system to wear it just shows you, rip off your clothes, and reveal that you're wearing nothing but lingerie."

I read that part and I was like O_O 'WTF' Wow Frankie has issues....and then I read this part.

"I stared at him with a look that kind of resembled the emoticon "O.o". I mean, geez, man! Does this guy sit up all night thinking of ways to embarrass others?! But then again, this would be kinda funny. And maybe I'd finally accomplish my life-long goal of getting kicked out of Walmart! Yea!"

And I literally lol'd so hard I ended up falling off the couch. All I can say is thank the dark god's that no one else was in the living room at that time, because they just won't understand. I mean, its freaking hilarious.

1. I was thinking the same as Gerard.

2. Gerard and I have the same life-long goal.

and

3. He sounded so excited about getting kicked out of Walmart.

Now about you Authors Note, yes it is short, but it's funny so it doesn't matter. And yes, I would LOVE to see Gerard dress in drag, go into Walmart, and come out wearing nothing but lingerie. As I am a pervert like that, and the metal picture would make me laugh myself into a coma, but totally be worth it.

I so CAN'T wait for your next update. Seriously I am bouncing up and down as I type this out. Thank vampires for spell check.

UPDATE!

~Axel <3

This is soo good! <3

"Don't worry, Gerard. You may suck at writing, and you may always suck at writing, but I'll always love you, no matter what." That's like, my favorite part. XD It makes me really sad (...I don't know why :P) while making me laugh. And it's so Bert. :D

"I had never realized how cool and funny and sweet and beautiful he was.... I mean, in a friendly way, of course."

I read that and found my self thinking "Yeah, right, a friendly way, sure and I am the Queen of freaking England."

You had so many things that made me nod my head in agreement, like that relationship thing, and all the confusion Gerard was feeling while standing in the shower and leaning on Frank's shoulder. I was like, "Yeah, that's what a relationship does to you."

Everything was just amazingly written. You know I think I am in love with this chapter, because of what you wrote and how you wrote it. This chapter was like so realistic, and so just I don't know. I mean I know what I want to say I just can't form it into an actual understandable sentence, the words are there just jumbled, and its because of this chapter, but I loved this.

Thanks you muches for posting it.

Also, I'm looking forward to getting it. :)

UPDATE SOON, because you love me XD....no but seriously update soon.

hmm I just may put it on my frerard...
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UGGH! I forgot to comment after reading chapter 3. I fail.
Anyways, chapters 3 and 4 are both awesome.
It's actually a really good thing if it doesn't get all Frerard-ish too early in the story. It's always good to keep things going at a moderate pace, and that's exactly what you're doing, which makes the story absolute perfection. =)

*starts dancing around* Yes, yes yes. You updated! WOOHOO! *throws a party*

'Kay, now I feel, better. The last two chapters, felt kind of short to me, but that's prolly only cause i read fast. Other then that, amazingness! Gerard's decision of, "hey, I'm not going to sit here and take this shit anymore." Made me smile. And that scene with Frankie, and Gee in the rain made me laugh.

Loved the chaps, and can't wait for more. And also I will say this, I have recommended this story to a couple of my friends, as I do with all the stories, I like and I think they may like, But i shall pester then a bit till they actually read it. So, ha, one step ahead of you on that. :)

Again update!

~Axel-chan.

Hey, my partner in crime! I forgot how good your story was. Anyway. It's really good. But you knew that, 'cuz I've told you before, but I had to tell you again :P And, I literally JUST posted that chapter when you commented on it. And I had been trying to listen to Adam Lambert in the car like fifteen minutes before and my brother nearly killed me for it XD

Atleast XCyonide_SuicideX didn't threat you that she was going to start a riot... -_- consider yourself lucky...
But this is kinda fluff...
Hehe fluff...

It's amazingg. <3

Wow! It's sooo good. It's just... flows, ya know what I mean?
Yeah, I guess I'll do the whole cliche "begging-for-speedy-updates" thing now: PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! =)

Fist chapter Mind blowing.

Second chapter,

Heartbreaking beyond belief, but even though I felt like my heart was breaking, I enjoyed every painful minuet of it.

I love how easy it is too relate with Gerard, I mean its like I can actually feel the emotions coming off of him, and feel his self hate. It's just so descriptive, that I feel like I am watching a movie, and seeing the facial expressions, hearing the pain in their voices, feeling the emotion running threw their being...it's just so well, captivating.

I wish this chapter was longer, but you ended it perfectly although, painfully.

Please update soon! I am literally begging you in my mind, update!

~Axel-chan

OMG!

You had me at the first sentence, and then you held me. I was really close to crying when Gerard was being strangled. Seriously, that first chapter was just mind blowing. Your an amazing writer, please please please continue!

Seriously I HAVE GOT TO KNOW what happens next!

Don't leave me hanging for too long.

~Axel-chan

hey, its me lol i just raped your comment stream.

FIRST COMMENT!!!! VERY AWESOME!!!!=]