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  • wreckless.

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    This was really beautiful! <3
    June 14th, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    This was sweet. Generally I wouldn't like all the confusing jumping around that you had at the beginning of this, but I think it worked really well here and added a lot to the story.

    I loved that Emily was so wise for her years. Children just have a way of doing that sometimes.

    Fantastic work!
    October 21st, 2012 at 01:32am
  • gothique4

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    I love this - so well written but also so sad :-(
    Emily is such a cute little girl and so wise for her young years
    October 21st, 2012 at 01:24am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Sad, adorable, cute, depressing, and a really good story all wrapped up in one. ♥
    October 21st, 2012 at 12:33am
  • Nia_Flores

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    This was so sad! I almost cried!!! Threat But at the same time, it was so sweet!!! Great work!!!
    October 2nd, 2012 at 05:59pm
  • DaniGates

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    aww, i loved it <3
    May 20th, 2011 at 02:58am
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