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  • D. Dixon

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    I think Matt having a chapter would be great! :) I really love this story. ^_^ It's so unique, and it's so good. More soon!
    June 4th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • saint james.

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    I LOVE it! I cant wait for Matt to come hopefully in the next chapter. PLEASE update very soon!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 01:29am
  • arisosupernaturl

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    i like it already....its different.
    My kind of story. :)
    June 2nd, 2011 at 12:31am
  • arisosupernaturl

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    i like it already....its different.
    My kind of story. :)
    June 2nd, 2011 at 12:31am
  • Lover.Dearest

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    cvbdjvilugr I love this story
    June 1st, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • HailMisery

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    I love this.... nice plot :D can't wait for the next chapter.
    June 1st, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Yes, I'd love to read Matt's POV. More please. I love this story. It's original, for a fan-fiction story. I love it!
    June 1st, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    awe! I really hope Matt shows up in the next chapter
    Maybe it will stop the sadness
    <3 Michele
    June 1st, 2011 at 02:47pm
  • bob nathaniel bryar

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    oh wow! This is a really good story! Subscribing!
    June 1st, 2011 at 01:35pm
  • SynnerSaynt

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    I agree, yes on Matt's point of view!
    I hope he's near by.
    June 1st, 2011 at 09:03am
  • lizicea7x

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    yes matt
    love it mooooooore sooooon please
    June 1st, 2011 at 08:09am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Such a great chapter. Loved it. A little edit on one of Clark's spoken words. You have one too many 'on' words. The first one before the 'a' does not need to be there. Just thought I'd kindly point it out.
    May 8th, 2011 at 05:58pm
  • D. Dixon

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    Loved it! :D This is so good. I can't wait for more!
    May 8th, 2011 at 01:14am
  • Krista-Snaps

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    I know it's only the beginning, but your plot has me hooked. I love it. =)
    May 8th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • pjrox

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    Can't wait to see where this goes :)
    May 7th, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • xstallionducky

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    Is it bad that I want to kick her 'parents' in the face? Cause I do. Really.
    MORE.
    NOW.
    I command it.
    May 6th, 2011 at 10:15pm
  • dinugget

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    I hate her parents already.
    Great chapter! :)
    May 6th, 2011 at 01:46pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    This was an amazing update!
    I half expected Matt to be at the party
    but i can't wait to see where or how they finally meet up
    <3 Michele
    May 6th, 2011 at 01:32pm
  • Lover.Dearest

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    Ahhhh, this story is gunna be faaaaantastic.
    I already fucking love it
    May 6th, 2011 at 06:58am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    I freaking love the start of this!!!
    Please update as soon as you can!
    <3 Michele
    May 6th, 2011 at 03:56am
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