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  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Update soon pleassseee?
    December 12th, 2012 at 04:01pm
  • ScarletHearts

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    LOOOOVE the story! Update soon?
    October 20th, 2012 at 04:58am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    yay it was updated!
    update again when you can
    September 9th, 2012 at 09:05pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    well that can't be good.
    more soon?
    June 27th, 2012 at 02:54am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    more soon?
    June 10th, 2012 at 07:15am
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    woot! :3
    just a shout out, i guess
    keep writing xD
    May 31st, 2012 at 02:08am
  • bluecat2817

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    I love the last chapter it was amazing ! Smile
    May 28th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    i kinda feel bad for Draco
    nice update though
    can't wait to read more
    May 27th, 2012 at 09:03am
  • bluecat2817

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    by the way fantastic writing ,i havent found a chapter in here that has been boring they keep you guessing and your mind wandering i wish i could write this well !
    May 27th, 2012 at 04:33am
  • bluecat2817

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    even though draco deserved it the last chapter makes me sad bc i want him and her to be together and had draco not screwed up they would be grrr...lol
    May 27th, 2012 at 04:31am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    haha not so fun when the table are turned is it Draco?
    Voldemort is sooo sketchy. Yes I know I'm stating the obvious :P
    More soon?
    May 12th, 2012 at 07:56am
  • SinfulGrly

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    is this story still active?? it sounds really intresting and by all the comments it sounds awesome :D
    May 8th, 2012 at 02:50am
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    Damn....I always spell the wrong when I start to rush. >.< I SHALL BE MORE CAREFUL!!!
    May 6th, 2012 at 05:32pm
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    this is good but please be careful with your spelling, there are alot of mistakes that sort of distract from the main story line.
    e.g. it's "decide" not "deside"
    May 6th, 2012 at 05:25pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Can I smack Draco? Please?
    More soon?
    May 5th, 2012 at 06:41am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Sounds interesting...more soon?
    March 22nd, 2012 at 07:18pm
  • After Twilight

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    The whole shubang, eh? Sounds interesting.
    *waggles eyebrows*
    Great update, lol.
    Even though it wasn't supposed to be funny,
    I cracked up at the bit where Draco ripped her book onwards.
    Talk about classic!
    A special visit from ... say, Fenrir?
    They could sort things out!!
    March 20th, 2012 at 07:55am
  • memyselfndI

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    You're story has so much potential, but there are some things you can't really change. Not even in a fan-fiction.
    1) Muggle things such as laptops, MP3s/ iPods and Netflix won't work in Hogwarts.
    2)Draco hates Muggles and their things so even if they did work, he wouldn't use them.
    3) Most wizards in the books are almost completely ignorant of the muggle world. They wouldn't know who Carrie Underwood is, let alone the Phantom of the Opera (though this could be remedied by saying that they had studied Muggle music in class).
    4) Spell check. For example it's acknowledge. Not egnolidge.
    March 19th, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • SarahhhDarlinggg

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    fucking love it!
    March 11th, 2012 at 12:45am
  • After Twilight

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    LOVE IT!!
    And I cried when Dumbledore died:'(
    You know what would be really dramatic?
    If Draco and Mercy kissed while there was that huge battle,
    y'know, the one where Moldywart dies.
    Yes, that does mean Voldemort. I just created a new name for him.
    Epic, aren't I?
    March 10th, 2012 at 11:37pm
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