by the way fantastic writing ,i havent found a chapter in here that has been boring they keep you guessing and your mind wandering i wish i could write this well !
this is good but please be careful with your spelling, there are alot of mistakes that sort of distract from the main story line. e.g. it's "decide" not "deside"
The whole shubang, eh? Sounds interesting. *waggles eyebrows* Great update, lol. Even though it wasn't supposed to be funny, I cracked up at the bit where Draco ripped her book onwards. Talk about classic! A special visit from ... say, Fenrir? They could sort things out!!
You're story has so much potential, but there are some things you can't really change. Not even in a fan-fiction. 1) Muggle things such as laptops, MP3s/ iPods and Netflix won't work in Hogwarts. 2)Draco hates Muggles and their things so even if they did work, he wouldn't use them. 3) Most wizards in the books are almost completely ignorant of the muggle world. They wouldn't know who Carrie Underwood is, let alone the Phantom of the Opera (though this could be remedied by saying that they had studied Muggle music in class). 4) Spell check. For example it's acknowledge. Not egnolidge.
LOVE IT!! And I cried when Dumbledore died:'( You know what would be really dramatic? If Draco and Mercy kissed while there was that huge battle, y'know, the one where Moldywart dies. Yes, that does mean Voldemort. I just created a new name for him. Epic, aren't I?