Hopeful Liars - Comments

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Nice Story, I like the sort of mystery of who her mother is and all that. i did notice some spelling and grammar mistakes and all that but, everybody makes those, Good writing! :)

Just wondering if you'll ever update this again since it's been awhile. I hope you do it's a good story! :)

Or maybe you could try rewriting it since its an older story and your writing has most likely improved ! :)

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Nice Story, I like the sort of mystery of who her mother is and all that. i did notice some spelling and grammar mistakes and all that but, everybody makes those, Good writing! :)

Just wondering if you'll ever update this again since it's been awhile. I hope you do it's a good story! :)

Or maybe you could try rewriting it since its an older story and your writing has most likely improved ! :)

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Nice Story, I like the sort of mystery of who her mother is and all that. i did notice some spelling and grammar mistakes and all that but, everybody makes those, Good writing! :)

Just wondering if you'll ever update this again since it's been awhile. I hope you do it's a good story! :)

Or maybe you could try rewriting it since its an older story and your writing has most likely improved ! :)

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Nice Story, I like the sort of mystery of who her mother is and all that.

Just wondering if you'll eve update this again since it's been awhile.

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Nice Story, I like the sort of mystery of who her mother is and all that.

Just wondering If you'll ever update this again since It's been awhile! :)

WOOO NEW STORY!!! I finally get to read it XD. Although, is it ever getting updated?? :P

Also, you have two different ages in the third chapter. Make up your mind darling! Aren't they supposed to be 11 and not 12 anyways? Either way, you say 13 and 12, within 2 sentences, so you might want to fix that.

As usual, i'm excited! :D

I really liked this story. The original plot is very interesting and your attention to detail is fantastic. You had a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes but it was nothing that took away too much from the plot. The layout is fantastic and I hope that you will continue writing this story. Keep up the good work =)

OMG YAYYYYYYY!!!!

i''m back.. and they're havent' been any updates since JUNE!!!! WOMAN!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE GOD DAMN IT!!

xoxoxoxo love you <3 i'm only mad cuz i like your writing so much. DUUUUHHH

now. be a good little slave... AND WRTIE!!!! :)

also, you should post pics on how your back tattoo came out XD

updates I hope are going to be soon<3 Already love it. The prequel had me crying, and this first chapter just made me want to cry again, because she's missing so much. Ahhhh

Just read the prequel, sat here sobbing like a fool at the ending :)
Can't wait to see how this story pans out!

I love this already :D

This is AHHHH!!!! Sorry I haven't commented yet. I suddenly remembered you were writing a sequel to your lovely story My Wings Are Black. YAY!! I always adore your writing! Its absolutely fantastic! :)

*Subscribe!!

Okay, I'm not sure if I even ever commented on the prequel..... But I did read and subscribe to it. That's one of my biggest pet peeves yet I do it myself... Anyway....... I love this so far! Update soon?

Okay, I'm not sure if I even ever commented on the prequel..... But I did read and subscribe to it. That's one of my biggest pet peeves yet I do it myself... Anyway....... I love this so far! Update soon?

I love this story so far!!! great first chapter!! :)
I adored 'My Wings are Black' and I can't wait to see how this story goes :D

I just read the whole prequel and was sobbing by the end of it!
Can't wait to see where you take this story =]

I'm already in love with this.
<3

I adore how you ended, 'My wings are Black.'
There couldn't be a better ending.

This is amazing.
Keep up the great work.
:D