First. I love the layout and the title picture. It's so cute! :D
I love the whole concept of this story. Of course, I've read stories like this before but this one was really good. You did your best with the... Scene and you did a good job. You used a variety of vocabulary words and that's always a go with be. The more excelled words the better!
I also like that you used some of their crew members, even if it was only for a second. :)
Very good job. Thanks for joining my contest :)
August 9th, 2011 at 02:49am
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I love the whole concept of this story. Of course, I've read stories like this before but this one was really good. You did your best with the... Scene and you did a good job. You used a variety of vocabulary words and that's always a go with be. The more excelled words the better!
I also like that you used some of their crew members, even if it was only for a second. :)
Very good job. Thanks for joining my contest :)