I love this story you can feel all the emotions and see the bond of friendship between the guys. Most stories dont have that. I cant wait for the next chapter.
wahhhhhhh this story is just too amazing!!!! Travis is just so cute:') hahah i like Arianna's character, and Check Yes Josephine was really original :D but ahhh no Jase is her boyfriend, i was kinda shocked!!! cant wait for more<3
CHECK YES JOSEPHINE, OH MY GOD. I'm changing 'Juliet' to 'Josephine' on my iPod, do you even know how long I laughed about that? You write Travis' weight loss and weakness really fantastically and I love the way his friends are so concerned. It's all very believable. What I don't love is that Arianna has a boyfriend. Drama, drama, drama! I mean, Travis is already in such an emotionally unstable state of mind but hopefully he'll be able to pull through it and win her over! I have faith in Travis and I'm 100% behind him. I can't wait to see what their adventure is. I kind of really wish that I was on this adventure too, but ya know, we can't all be so lucky. Love this story almost as much as I love you (and Travis Clark)
I'm going to agree with everyone else and say, this is soo great so far! I absolutely adore that she said Josephine instead of Juliet, it's the perfect opener! And yes, that pain that Travis is feeling is so relate-able and it's so true that when your in pain and in need, its never embarrassing to lean on your friends! Love love love. -gianna.
BECCA, BECCA, BECCA. I love you for writing this. I don't think I've ever read a We The Kings fic before. You're so good with writing feelings that I feel the pain that Travis feels. Poor ginger baby :( I can't even wait to see where you bring this. I've got good feelings. Ah, I'm in love with you.
Despite the rather short length, I can feel the emotions that Travis is feeling and I really enjoy this. You are very good at making sure there is just enough detail to hook the reader but also keeping us wanting more. I really enjoyed this, although it was rather sad. I think I might subscribe to this. =D.
I really liked this despite not knowing We the Kings. I could feel the emptiness inside of him and it made me feel every inch of his soul. I felt this piece was absolutly beautiful and I for one want to know what happens next so I will deffinitly sub!
Beautiful detail, no grammar errors, and the layout and banner is beautiful!