Sacred Blue. - Comments

i love this. i love this so much. how many times can i say that your writing is perfect?

That was so heart-wrenching...
I wanted to take gerards girl by her hair and put her in a paper shredder! D:

Ok, so I finally got round to reading this. OMG this was amazing <3 So heart breaking and perfect.

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Oh My God.
That was beautiful.
The way she kisses you, the way she touches the little red mark below your eye. I wish I could be that mark, I'd rest on your cheek for a thousand fucking years. My neck hurts from being bent in prayer, my corpse of a self trembles in my own rageful fucking tears. Please, God. Make this stop. Mary, listen to me; I need your grace to make him love me. Make me beautiful – fuck, make me a girl. I don't even want to be, but if he wanted it that way … I would. If he's too scared to be with me, then I would. I was always the girly one anyways.

My that paragraph made me feel so much for Frank, like I can totally understand that level of devotion to someone. It's so painful </3 And you described it so well. Gah, girl! I finish read this and I'm all like 'smiles widely' SHE ASKED ME TO MARRY HER :'') Then I like have to find my favourite bit and quote it!
But seriously that paragraph really got at me, you know?
Nipped me straight in the heart muscle :/
I think the ending actually hurt you know? The way he treated Frank like a brother, and not in the way he was praying for :'(
Well done wifey!
xxx

agreed, lys.
however, i really liked this. i liked the image of a disgruntled frankie in a church full of old people.... lol.
this was so sad... and i liked how u kinda took a risk writing a story like this. pretty frickin cool :)

*bangs head against table even harder* AS IF IT WERE ALL THAT EASY

I couldn't stop crying, I feel that conflict all the time, it overcomes you.

I wasn't offended at all, but I was rather sad. ='(
You gave this such a realistic feel. The emotions seem like pieces of reality.

"That ball of fire in my body worsens, and I'm filled with such longing to be her."
Ah dammit, poor Frank.

ps. I forgot Mibba would say I'm 20 now D:

Wow.I love how you're able to make such iconic fan fic characters so freaking different in every story you do, it's a real talent :). I like this one a lot, can't wait to see where it goes. I like how Frankie's mind seems incredibly fragile so he turns to god. :). Also, there are a few teeny tiny spelling mistakes, like I think only two where you've put me instead of my or vice versa. I thought you'd like to know. :) Keep writing! <3

It was BEAUTIFUL

ohhh, Frankie.

I loved the risk you took with this. And as usual, it was awesome.

it was so sad... and still had such a deep feeling. my heart's burning, really.
it's so beautiful; the words you chose, the way you described everything... I can't believe I haven't read this before; my heart's aching from all the beauty in this, and all those feelings, and all that sadness.
oh, my gosh.
I loved this, bb.
«3 xo

Ugh! That was so sad! Poor, poor Frankie! Stupid Gerard, don't you know that you're supposed to always be with Frankie?

But that was beautiful, bb. And it's mine! :D But seriously it was perfect and so great and every single time you write you make me fall in love with the characters all over again. I don't know how you do it but you do. You have amazing ideas and you're such an amazing writer! Ugh, okay still fangirling, sorry.

And can I just add how I loved the Dungeons and Dragons thing! Haha.