The Summer List - Comments

I love the layout and how this is set-up.

This story is cute as, really.

It reminds me a little of this novel that I read ages ago called Indigo Girls and believe it or not, that's where I actually first found out about this break called 'summer' (we don't have summer breaks in Fiji) and all the things that happened over it.

Personally, I find Charlotte adorable, more adorable than Jori and Alice definitely, but that might be because I can relate to her so well. Jori seems a little too superficial (I don't know why she gives off that vibe, but she is.) and Alice a little iffy. Yeah, Charlotte is a definite favorite.

:)

You have a few grammar errors here and there, just a few typos really, but that's it. I might not be too keen on the pink layout and background, but that doesn't matter, honestly. You've got a cute thing going here <3

It's so simple & cute and lovely. I love it.

<33333! Thanks:D

I kind of like this.
it's cute and kind of... I don't know, but it's appealing (:

Alas,
I am a shalsh sort of person,
but still,
this is pretty good writing