I love the layout and how this is set-up.
September 4th, 2011 at 06:34pm
This story is cute as, really.
It reminds me a little of this novel that I read ages ago called Indigo Girls and believe it or not, that's where I actually first found out about this break called 'summer' (we don't have summer breaks in Fiji) and all the things that happened over it.
Personally, I find Charlotte adorable, more adorable than Jori and Alice definitely, but that might be because I can relate to her so well. Jori seems a little too superficial (I don't know why she gives off that vibe, but she is.) and Alice a little iffy. Yeah, Charlotte is a definite favorite.
:)
You have a few grammar errors here and there, just a few typos really, but that's it. I might not be too keen on the pink layout and background, but that doesn't matter, honestly. You've got a cute thing going here <3
