Broken Glass - Comments

This is definitely a keeper :) You should be proud of your work, it's beautiful ^_^ I can't wait to read more, that is, if you update any time soon ^^

That was really amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I only read chapter 1, but I'm about to read chapter 2.

So far this story is A M A Z I N G . I wish you would update it though , I would love to read more then 2 chapters. !

Wow. That's damn awesome. I love this story. Its so intensely awesome. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!! :D

I keep forgetting how emotional and... authentic you make your characters, and I enjoy that. c:
But, please finish this one, LOL, cause I'm curious for more.
This is the start of a timid relationship, and I want to see where that path goes.

I love this story. I can't wait to read more!! It should definitely be an interesting relationship!

I FINALLY READ YER UPDATES, LOL. I love, love, love them so far.

I DEMAND MORRRREEEEE. :D

thats great... your character seems to be very... angry... (to light of a word to use but its all i got) it feels like he's been cheated outa life or something like that... if im right... but its a great begining... i hope you continue... =)