I keep forgetting how emotional and... authentic you make your characters, and I enjoy that. c: But, please finish this one, LOL, cause I'm curious for more. This is the start of a timid relationship, and I want to see where that path goes.
thats great... your character seems to be very... angry... (to light of a word to use but its all i got) it feels like he's been cheated outa life or something like that... if im right... but its a great begining... i hope you continue... =)