Ooh, I love this! It's so...creepy! The first chapter is an excellent intro. I literally swallowed my own fear - I genuinely loved this line. I haven't seen the idea of swallowing your own fear used in such a unique way before, and it works very well in context! I also love how you have Faith having a pretty shitty day, so much so that she does originally think that the voice is caused by stress, and the idea of her finding the person in the picture is pretty creepy!
This is such a unique and excellent idea, please continue!
COMMENT VIRGINITY!!!:D lmao I loved it chika!! Great way to start ur first original fic!:) I'm keepin in touch on yet another one of your amazing stories!:) Looooovers you!! Lmfao
I literally swallowed my own fear - I genuinely loved this line. I haven't seen the idea of swallowing your own fear used in such a unique way before, and it works very well in context! I also love how you have Faith having a pretty shitty day, so much so that she does originally think that the voice is caused by stress, and the idea of her finding the person in the picture is pretty creepy!
This is such a unique and excellent idea, please continue!