In Another Life - Comments

Love this story! I stumbled upon this earlier tonight and stayed up until I finished reading it. You give your character such an amazing personality. She's incredibly realistic and relatable. Only thing I'm missing is more action with Harry!!! Can't wait for the next update!

I'm really sorry to hear about your grandfather passing. i hope your well. loss is always hard to deal with, so i understand completely why you havent written as frequently as before.

First thing's first, I'm sincerely sorry for the loss of your grandfather. I don't know what I would do without mine. :( I really hope that things become easier for you in the days to come...!
And German? I took that in high school(: Ich liebte Deutsch Klasse. It's really easy once you get down to it lol
Anywho, I liked the chapter. I was a bit confused because I hadn't read it in so long, but soon it all came back and I was fine(: I laughed when I read "You have pointy elbows." x)
Take your time updating! Keep it up!
<3

I really your story and I'm really intrigued on the note you ended chapter 9! I hope you update soon!!

Loved the update!! Can't wait to read more!

i love this story :D im a new subscriber btw. just thot id let u know

i love this story :D im a new subscriber btw. just thot id let u know

I love this and I can't wait to see what's going to happen the next time they meet together. PMS!!!

Sorry I didn't comment sooner. :P My computer is being crappy. But you'rea great writer. Update soon! (:
Also, do you plan on updating your bluebird story soon? haha (:

please please please update! i'm begging you!

I think I'll title this Random Thoughts and Notes because It's not a very organized comment...
Alright. First random thing I'm going to say is this: Gwyneth Paltrow is awesome. Heather? Not so much.
Also, I'm liking the "you don't serve Caviar in buckets," thing. XD
And you know this, but I absolutely loved the botox thing.... :P
I also love the cut-to... "What's going on?" "I'm not sure... is it done yet?" Totally reminds me of me during sports games... of any kind, basically.

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“It’s good to see you’re not laughing by yourself this time,” A quiet voice states from my right.

Thoughts on this? AAAAHHHH!!!!
Sorry.
Also, about this paragraph we just discussed (giggled) about... He's so sweet! "Hey there, I'm the prince and everything, but really, I just like cars and food and stuff... and your smile while we're at it..."
Quick thing here:

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He grins yet again and I can’t help but notice the way the corners of his eyes crinkle adorably or the ruddy red patches on his cheeks.

If I were you, I'd reverse the order of "the way the corners of his eyes crinkle adorably" and "the ruddy red patches on his cheeks." You know, switch their positions in the sentence? For some reason, the adverb seems like more of an ending than a "flow word" into the next detail she's noticing. But then that's just my opinion or instinct or whatever, and chances are that you're following some specific grammar rule that I don't know about or you've got some important reason for phrasing the sentence that way and I didn't get it...
And then you know how much I laughed at Harry's "slip this into the conversation" moment...
Ahhh. Here goes the half page of mental stuff, right? XD
And now: HE WINKED!!!!!!
I really really like the name Griffith!!
And I'm not sniggering over here.... "What's going on in your life lately?" "Well... I've become friends with His Royal Highness (comma?) Prince of Wales Harry (purposely reversed for added humor...) 'and all that...'"
Griffith is great! Typical teenage obnoxiousness here.
It's also adorable that she finds courage in her new shoes... Definitely something I do.
Ahh. You and babies. Also, I love the name Aerona... Never heard it before, but it's awesome. :) I also like that you're making Bryn a Tad ;) shocked and unsure about this at first. It reflects what I'm thinking about the whole age difference thing, I know. I'm curious about where you're going to go with this...
Well alright. :) Sorry this comment was so extremely haphazard, but... you know. So is my brain. :P
Lovely as usual! :) <3

I love this! :) Please update soon!

I love it! Its amazing!

I adore this plot. And your writing style.
Great job.
Keep up the good work.
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<3

I don't remember how I came across this story but I'm so glad I did. It's so effing good! Cannot wait until you update again!

I LOVE YOU!!!!
But this post made me homesick more than I already was :/
I say go for a fourth day in a row!!!

Great job! I love the update and I was able to learn something new!! Thanks!

I'm gonna say what everyone else has said but I love this story you are a very talented writer.

Love it :) <3

eight: Sweetness, a new chapter for me to love. The details once again genius and i love the names of her younger siblings. So what's the newest Matthews to be called (when the time gets there)? Wondering if she's going to get the internship? Wondering what's going to happen next? And yeah, going four for four would be awesome.