oh, gosh, that was intense. i think seeing how dependent they are on each other brings attention to their problems, if that makes sense. and i'm tired, so i don't think it does. but i think that maybe they'll separate in order to get help. or not. i don't know. i can't wait to see what happens next (:
THis is an amazing story that captures my attention. You guys have done a spectacular job, and when you started another chapter or even sentence please send me a message so i may read it. It is wonderful. Im astounded at the grammer and such articulateness of it.. Simply amazing
^wow, that's my comment! anyway, that was short, but wonderful. i love how much detail there is, like something as simple as someone running their hands through their hair. i like doing that, too, actually- adding detail. anywho, i'm excited to see how brendon reacts to what she said (:
i've actually been meaning to comment on this (: i really like how well-written the story is. i like the story in general, too. i can't wait to see where it goes. i hope you update soon :3