Spinning - Comments

  • sharpedo

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    Did you change the name of this? Was it just 'Spinning' before? Anyways, I really enjoyed this. I'm guessing that Carly has a pretty good relationship with P. Kane's parents?
    June 23rd, 2011 at 09:15am
  • M1295

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    Oh my gosh! So much drama, but I loved it. I really hope you update soon! I want to know where she's gonna go. And if Jonny did remember that Patrick did cheat.
    June 8th, 2011 at 05:04am
  • the conqueror

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    I liked this bit! It was fluffy and cute! I like the way you write Patrick, it's different from how I've seen him portrayed. For a moment in the chapter I thought he was going to propose... but it was something similar. Hope the writers block goes away soon... I want more of this :)
    May 24th, 2011 at 08:31pm
  • kaitlynpalmtrees

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    This is so good! I love it!
    May 22nd, 2011 at 12:07am
  • Jayla1231

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    Like it a lot so far. Its nice to see him trying to work on a relationship. Too many times he is portrayed terribly, lol. Check out mine if u get a chance. Its my first.
    May 21st, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    I just found this and I really like it. I love seeing the softer sides of hockey players, well actually guys in gerneral lol. You are doing a really good job and I can't wait to see where it's going to go from here. Keep it up =)
    May 16th, 2011 at 05:34pm
  • the conqueror

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    I was pleasantly surprised when I found this, it's really good. I'm not so sure of where you're going to take this, and I love that, it's always nice to read unpredictable stories.
    The characters seem interesting and I would love to know more about Carly and how she met Patrick.
    Great job! Can't wait to read more :)
    May 14th, 2011 at 05:41am