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  • NMT82

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    Great ending! I agree I hope my baby daddy is like the Jon you described! Great story, really enjoyed it.
    July 11th, 2011 at 10:21am
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    Awwww I hope my future baby daddy us like Jon :)
    July 9th, 2011 at 06:23am
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    Really cute baby! He does look like Jon, lol! I really enjoy all the little details you put in the story, they make it so much better. I hope you make it a happy ending :)
    July 7th, 2011 at 08:02am
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    Too cute how you made them both have boys! Jon seems like he would be good a dad.
    July 5th, 2011 at 08:20am
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    Way to stick up for Nicole Jonny! Am I the only one reading this story?! I know the writer of this story has got to be sick of hearing just my opinion!! lol
    June 24th, 2011 at 05:14am
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    Awsome Nicole is going to have a baby! I think Nicole should have a boy and use the J.B name. Really sweet way to honor someone. Her dad seems like a donkeys butt!
    June 23rd, 2011 at 04:32am
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    So happy she is back in Chicago! I love how to left all her bagage behind to go to Jon, super cute. I wonder what the surprise is! Awsome update!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 08:33pm
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    YEA! I really like the direction. I hope Nicole and Jon get back together. I really enjoy your story it makes my nights at work go by so much faster!
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:51am
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    I am not so sure I like Nicole with Taylor but who knows I guess we will see!
    June 17th, 2011 at 07:41am
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    Interesting update, the kiss was really sweet. Good she told her brother what happened. What Jon did was messed up. Great writing! Can't wait to see were you take Taylor and Nicole's relationship.
    June 13th, 2011 at 04:08am
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    What do you mean come to his senses?
    June 11th, 2011 at 06:58am
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    Is johnny ever going to come to his senses?
    June 11th, 2011 at 06:36am
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    Hope Nicole meets a new cute guy!!
    June 8th, 2011 at 05:44am
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    Well way to go Jonny, broke up with Nicole on the worst day. Great first chapter.
    May 20th, 2011 at 03:46am
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