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  • SummerDrewIngle

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    Amazing , please write more? :))
    May 24th, 2013 at 06:21am
  • FairyPrincess2011

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    Please write more of this story!!! It is really good!!!
    September 7th, 2012 at 04:19am
  • Mew Aqua

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    Please update soon!
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:54am
  • Azarias

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    This is really interesting. I love the mystery of Alec's past. All these new things he's finding makes me think there's a lot more that he forgets than her realizes he does. I really like Frey's character, I'm glad Alec met him. Can't wait to be reading more! <3

    *subscribes*
    October 27th, 2011 at 10:32pm
  • Invisible Princess

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    i love this :D
    August 10th, 2011 at 09:50pm
  • Androoo

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    You should definitely continue! I like it!
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:52am
  • Livi12396

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    i like this story :D Please continue!
    July 20th, 2011 at 08:33am
  • unicorndreams

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    Different,
    I like it,
    Alot.
    <#
    July 15th, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • OhCatherineMyCaptain

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    Continueeeee.
    It's cute so far. :3

    xoxocat.
    June 12th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • gives u hell177

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    I feel bad for Alec
    I don't really know whether him not remembering is a good or bad thing.
    May 15th, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • gives u hell177

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    I like this.
    I feel like it has so much possiblity and it will probably end up being great.
    I'm also sure I will end up bawling my eyes out sometime while read this.
    May 11th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • herpy berpy.

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    I do like this. I really do. It seems as though it will develop into something amazing. The layout was a bit difficult to read, though. It was the gray text on black background. You could keep the gray text, just make it a bit lighter, so that it just look like black on black.
    May 11th, 2011 at 04:40am
  • CandyGuns

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    I like this. :)
    It's different. A good different.
    You should definitely continue this. X3
    May 11th, 2011 at 02:58am
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