Irish Lullaby - Comments

This is such a cute story. It makes me smile.

Yay I like this chapter. Her sister is here and it's one big, happy family. =D Me thinks that Anthony and Elina might hook up too. hahaha any way keep up the great work!

I swear this story is becoming my top favorite to read!!! Plz keep updating I just love reading this story!

Hahahaha I love the brothers, they make me laugh...some more. Pssst by the way you should make some more banners with Sanders/Garrett Hedlund. hahaha just a thought. Great chapter, can't wait for more.

This family introduction has been going on for like three chapters, come on,i wanna know what they say.

Of course Sanders keeps me laughing. Hahaha I do the same thing when I argue with my friends for fun. Great chapter, can't wait for more.

I want a Sanders of my own! hahaha

I must say I'm only on chapter 2 and I've laughed at just about everything Sanders has said! I love your choice on who he should look like, Garrett Hedlund. AND HE'S IRISH!! It explains the craziness.Trust me I should know. I'm as guilty as he is. He looks like my favorite actor and he's insane! I love him already. Keep it up! Can't wait for more!

This is well written, however there are a few mistakes. A couple of the 'you're' are supposed to be 'your' (I apologize for my grammar nagging) But I really do love this.
I had to force myself to stop reading last night. Keep updating, I can't get enough!

you have a nice concept and the story is well written, I like it so far, you're very descriptive maybe a bit TOO descriptive. the story is good overall, but maybe you can make the characters feel more natural.