You and Sunrise - Comments

I'm still in love with the story. I hope you update soon. I miss this story.

Blue!! You've made me so desperate I'm Re-reading a seven-chapter story!!

Ahhhhhhhhhh!! I just absolutely love you and you're writing style and all you're description and characters!!! I'm so glad that Lara(I'm typing on my phone, otherwise I'd fix her name) and her brother are finally getting somewhere!! The beach scene I loved, how it reminded her of home and their conversation. The car!! She is so cute sometimes, okay a lot of the time. Loved the chapter!!!

wow. I just love this story. I love your writing technique. All of the emotion. I can relate so well with the language barrier and thinking in a second language.
The entire ride and beach aspect with Tom was just so cute. I really enjoyed reading it and smiling and laughing at the cute parts. I could visualize it in my head. The details were great.

o.m.g. I don't know how you do this, how you write like that. I hardly ever come across anything written like this, in that way that it demands your attention and draws you out of reality, into it's own world that's somehow only words on paper. (or a screen)
Also, I kindof really want a hardback copy of this... Maybe, when you're done, we could publish a few, not for profit, of course, so copyright wouldn't apply... :D
And you updated so quickly! I hope that means you're doing better?

Wow, horticulture? I would've never guessed you were interested, but it actually seems really interesting. Anyway, this was a great chapter! I loved the scene on the beach, and I'm happy that some of the problems between Lára and her brother are getting fixed :D

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Thank you. Thank you so much. :') God, I love feedback.

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Here is my love!!!! Bill is really starting to become irritating. I don't know what his problem is and it makes me sad that he's so upset that he can't even go to his twin for help. The description as always was spectacular. I loved the joking with Gustav and Georg at the end. :) Congrats on getting into college!!! Loved the update, once again sorry for commenting so late. You really shouldn't stress so much on you're writing, you're such a beautiful writer. I love reading everything you update. :)

This is fucking beautiful. You always stress far too much over your work, but honey, you could make them come alive in your sleep.
I love how he 'refused' to dwell on Bills moodiness, yet thats all he ended up doing. That sounds exactly like Tom, and also exactly like any virgo.
I also love how your show how differently Bill acts around everyone else vs Tom. I think, even thou he's a total ass to Tom, it shows that he's not hiding himself, he's being honest to his brother.

Chapter 6 doesn't read like something you had to struggle out. I quite enjoyed it. It does a very good job of establishing that there is something wrong with Bill without giving away what it is.
I feel this chapter was very real and well written. Can't wait for the next update :)

Yeah!! You updated!! :) (My writing energy that i sent you must have worked! :P) I really liked the update with Georg and Tom teasing each other. I'm really curious about what Bill has been all mad about. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! ;) Please update soon!!!

yay! so glad to have you writing again and I for one loved it. poor tom and bill. write more soon!

Oh god you actually updated! I almost didn't believe it when I got the message. Anyway, it was a great chapter. You're too self conscious about putting them up. I thought the emotions were very realistic. Going to re-read it now- it's been way too long. I need to refresh my memory!

please please please update

Missing it!!!

Im in love with your story. Just sayin'

Yayyyyyy it's longer than I expected...... and my name is on it
It's such a nice thing to come back to after a boring day taking notes on my millions of projects!

Danke schön!

Loved the story. :) As always.

Favorite line: ...the sky is a sanctuary – a place only for stillness, and for the peace of star cities and cloud seas.

AND IIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEIIIIII WILL ALWAYS LOOOOOOVE YOUUUUUUU

(and this stooooooory)

But srsly. I do. Even though I can't pronounce Lara's name properly... xxx