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  • broken-hallelujah.

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    Seriously. Amazing. Fuck.
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:26am
  • IvytheOdd

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    I didn't mean to send that twice
    May 22nd, 2011 at 05:36am
  • IvytheOdd

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    OMG! This is Exterminate's friend and I read this you're amazing! I wish I could write like that! *jealous sigh* Teach me your ways! (that's sounds super creepy:P)
    May 22nd, 2011 at 05:36am
  • IvytheOdd

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    OMG! This is Exterminate's friend and I read this you're amazing! I wish I could write like that! *jealous sigh* Teach me your ways! (that's sounds super creepy:P)
    May 22nd, 2011 at 05:36am
  • IvytheOdd

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    you my friend are amazing
    I absolutely love this one-shot and almost not at all resentful that you killed my dear Frankie.
    May 14th, 2011 at 11:32pm
  • cutelilblondey00

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    I loved, and hated this story. I'm too emotional to even express my amount of feeloings towards this.
    May 12th, 2011 at 07:59am
  • ziggy-angeldust

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    First of all horrowshow. this is so sad.
    My God. THIRD TIME I'VE CRIED.
    Just plain beautiful.
    Keep up the good work.
    And thanks for commenting x]
    May 11th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • angy_something

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    You are a true genious. Your writting is just pure perfection. It is great without you even trying
    Love ya
    May 11th, 2011 at 05:36am
  • stallion duck.

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    The beauty of bloody love...
    You are a genious. I'm actually tearing up.
    May 11th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • DryIce.

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    With the suicide method down his throat and the bloody barrel resting peacefully, he thinks about his father. He always used to tell him to take his life into his his hands; to assume responsibility. The writer smiles around his gunmetal. It must have looked a little bizarre, with the drying tears and everything. But he's finally doing something right; taking his life in his own hands. It's time to see his raven-haired artist. He thinks he's pretty smart to be wearing red.

    Click,

    Click;

    Boom


    Ahh jesus, your genius leaves me speechless yet again. You kinda wrenched away at my heart there. The strings were tweaked mercilessly </3 I can't believe you killed Frank :''( So sad :'( Gah, you are the master of doomed romances, seriously. You portray everything so vividly, I actually feel for your characters, it's... profound!
    xxx
    May 11th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • KimmaLoveLaugh

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    Oh my God! Again with you making me cry. I loved the way you wrote this. I love the way you basically tell us their whole lives in a few paragraphs. It's really great.

    You're fabulous. I love you! <3
    May 10th, 2011 at 05:24pm