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  • SpencerG

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    Fucking awesome story!!!!
    I feel bad for Johnny!! I would hate being the ninth wheel *frowns*

    Anywhoo!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! But until then... ^_^
    December 27th, 2011 at 09:09pm
  • hachie

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    LOL Jimmy definitely got very fluster when she tried those outfits on for him!
    And Matt is totally in the dog house because Toni caught him starring at another woman.
    And it happened to be Val!
    Jimmy is freaking adorable!
    Paying for her purchase and just being down right sweet!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 20th, 2011 at 08:49am
  • KevinM

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    Ahhh! Cute. Kimmybear? Love it.
    June 1st, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • KevinM

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    They are so cute. It's adorable. I wonder if Jimmy will ask her out soon and how. Johnny needs a girl, too. I kind of feel bad for him.
    May 27th, 2011 at 10:14am
  • hachie

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    Aw them having a sleep over is so CUTE! X3
    And the way she always gets flustered when she caught staring at Jimmy!
    They would totally make an adorable couple because they both have deep love for each other even though it may be early in the relationship for them.
    Jimmy should definitely ask her out soon!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 25th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • hachie

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    I love your story!
    And Kim is so adorable, she is really meant for Jimmy because she brings the best out of him!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PELASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 25th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • KevinM

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    I don't know what drawls me into this story. I don't know. I like though. :) The pace moves along well.
    May 25th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • saint james.

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    I love it. Keep the updates coming!
    May 12th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • AvengedBaby1100

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    love it. cant wait for the next update.. =]
    May 12th, 2011 at 06:37pm
  • Afflatus

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    Hehehe this was cuuuuute. :3
    IM GONNA GO CRAZY UNTIL THE NEXT UPDATE! Dx
    In other words... Do it faaaast, woman! ^-^
    May 12th, 2011 at 03:22pm
  • Afflatus

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    Leslie is... an STD & Aids infected hoe. Ohhhh. Bishhh.>.>
    Anyways, awesome update! I luuurrve it! :D
    May 12th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • saint james.

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    I really like it so far. I wonder what is going to happen next update very soon!
    May 12th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • Syco11

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    love it
    May 12th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • Afflatus

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    I loooove it. ^.^
    It's really good. Update immediately. O_O
    May 10th, 2011 at 04:33am
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