Masterpiece - Comments

It kinda reminded me of Our Town when Emily was talking to the dead and how they where so... bland and lifeless (obviously, they're dead). And then the sled reminded me of Ethan Frome, except he crashed into a tree... and did it intentionally. Anyway, I thought it was a fantastic story and good for you for getting it into your school's magazine. It deserved it. :)

Wow, it's sad but I really liked it. Death wouldn't seem so scary if we all went out that way but who knows? It was really good, nice job. :)