I Could Kid Myself by Thinking That I'm Fine - Comments

Wow!
I really love this piece, short, yet brilliant and intense. This is really beautiful. :)♥

I don't like the spacing. It'd be so much better if it was double spaced like all the other stories and such on here.

Other than that, it's really really cute! I've always loved Harry Potter. It's just so awh.

This is an adorable piece, and I love the layout by the way!
I thought you made Sirius and Lupin your own, and the slash in this wasn't thrown in your face, it was nice and delicate. I really got dragged into the plot, and it would be brilliant if it wasn't just a drabble (This is coming from someone who dislikes slash!)
My only fault is that the dialogue isn't double spaced, I'm not entirely sure but I don't think you're meant to substitute double spacing for indenting. Best check that out!
Well done!