The Secrets. - Comments

This story sounds great, I love the plot, the beginning, the tenson, the names you've used. It's extremely detailed as well. There's honestly nothing bad I could say about it, just keep working at it. :) I'm very impressed by it. It's so far, one of the best one's I've read on mibba, (though the other's I've read are fanfiction and who really likes fanfiction? O_O)

Awh this story is great! It drew me in from the first chapter and i couldn't stop. The writing technique you use is brilliant and i could imagine every bit!:) the storyline is perfect and very intersting, you really should carry on the story! Please?!:))))

This is good, all I can say is I LOVE IT!

A M A Z I N G

You're a greta author with great ideas and I think that you'l do really well if you take writing to the next level, maybe if you want to tema up some time you could message me and we could do a story together, but thats jsyta s suggestion.

Holy sugar I don't care if this is over a year old these chapters are brilliant and so is the storyline. I love the banner because it fits in so well. And I love the synopsis of how they are all grieving and trying to overcome her death and trying to find out who killed her. Such a talent, I wish this story lasted!

Kate, you are a much better writer than me so stop complaning! Your chapters are always amazing. I can't believe you could have broken your foot :/ That absolutley sucks! Get well soon :( missing you already! xxx

Aaagghhh I love it :D I have no idea how I'm going to match that now though!! I should have plenty of time to update seeing as I'm stuck at home for the rest of the week!! XD xx

Love this chapter Holly! :D I can't wait till tonight, guitar lesson!!! ;) Update soon Kate! xxx

Brilliant chapter Cupcake :D It's really, really good :) I'll update asap but I'm bringing my laptop with me to Germany so you can write your update if you need to. We do need to sort out what will happen in the next chapters though so we'll discuss at school and on the bus to Deutschland.

Really brilliant chapter though. Love it and love you too :) xxxx

along with This Is Our Time, Fighting The Sytsem and Take No Prisoners... yeahaahh not lilkely... this is me we're talking to! xx

:O Love the new chapter Kate!! You both better get updating soon!!! :D xx

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this is really good o.o
updateeee?

Holly where are they from? I'm actually writing my chapter now and I was wondering XD xx

I love this story I had to read it really quick because I'm sat on Jodie and she's saying that her leg is going numb :L Do you and Kate do anything at school other than write stories? Bless at least you do something with your time I just sit and stare at the clock :L I think this is going to be an amazing story and I can't wait to see what happens :D x

Do not expect me to write more than 800 words a chapter... I haven't got that much patience. But yeah I won't be able to do some other than at school and I'm busy writing my Seanie story so mine won't be very good :/ I'm sure yours will be amaazing though :D xx

So far I've done around 800 words but I'm planning to write quite a bit more and make my first chapter normal book length or there around. Probably 3000 at least. I've wrote some more of my first chapter last night but not much as I was doing my art and my english. Hopefully (if I write loads today and tonight) I could get it posted on Friday. We can try once a week, but it could be difficult with exams at the moment but if we do some every night we could post once a week :) xxx

YAY... then people will get to read my crapness that will be crap :D How long are you making your chapter? it'll give me a rough idea of what it'll be like. Shall we try update once a week?

Yeah, this was what we were on about at school ;) your sherlock holmes skills are amazing :L

Glad you like it Jade :D I'm writing the next chapter atm :) should be up by the end of the week xxx

Love this new story I can't wait to read more!! I'm going to take a wild guess and saw this is what you were talking about at school :P x

Mwuahhaaha, your section is so much better than mine XD we can get planning the next bits at school and you're writing first btw XXX

I love this story already :D