This story is so fucking amazing. My god. I love how you chose something unusual to write it on, yet made it sound so much like it could actually happen. And it doesn't have that rushed quality like most people's, where it just feels like the entire point is to get to somebody falling in love, not how they get there. I read some of your other stories and they were great, and this is no exception. In fact, I feel like it surpasses the others I read.
im literally crying because of the effing cliffish end of that last chapter. I mean come on, im in love with this story and i finished the last chapter, expecting to see a next chapter button and theres not one!!! AHHHHHHHH update, or i may just die!!!