Serendipity - Comments

Incredible. I always enjoy reading your stories. You have many, I see. Although this was absolutely adorable. Loved the story. You are one of the top writers I have ever read from. :D

And i'm going to see BTR on Sept. 3rd. :D

Oh my goodness, this was just precious.
I'd like to point out that I've never actually been in a hospital for a birth before, so while I've seen this on TV and such, I've never actually experienced it. But I swear to you I was in the middle of this story the whole time. Your writing is amazing and it just sucks people in.

Deciding to leave it all up to fate, as they had everything else in their twist-and-turn relationship, James and his wife had chosen not to find out the sex of their future child, so they hadn’t exactly thought of a name yet.

I really really liked that line. Obviously, the main character of this can be debated as either the father or Mya, but this is really one of the only insights we get in reference to the mother. I love how it gives the couple more personality, even in a story that isn't about them, but, rather, their daughter. Little things like that make stories like this as good as they are.

Great job, once again!

That was unbelievably adorable(:
It was really well written, and the descriptions were outstanding(:
It was all around awesome.
The best of luck!

P.S. I did mention the adorable factor right? because it was(: