The Last Night - Comments

That was incredible

That was HOTT:))

Megan can write sex better than anyone
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Ze Bass Monkey:

Wow. That was cute, sexy and sweet, all at the same time.

Totally agree, I really enjoyed it, it was a lovely story.x

oh and also... Frikey = Yummyness xD

waw that was great :D

I love your writing - are you sure it's just a one-shot? cuz it COULD continue... ;)

xoxox

this was really well written
i love it, it's so cute

xx

I loved it and I thought the sex fit perfectly. You made it clear, without saying a word, that they had both been fighting attraction for one another. Why else would Frank keep coming back to Mikey? Why else would he want to leave so badly? He was obviously in love with him but too afraid to say it. And Mikey was so sweet, just taking care of Frank and not demanding anything in return, never trying to take advantage of the poor broken boy.

When it came out, when they both realized that the feelings were mutual, why wouldn't it be expressed in a sexual act? This wasn't first realization of Love, only first realization of mutual feelings. How better for those feelings to be expressed? Besides which, it was oral, not full-blown sex. To me, it seemed very natural and fit perfectly.

My favorite lines...

I smiled and rubbed your arms, feeling the ridges of cuts that covered your beautiful skin. You were so delicate, and I couldn’t help but feel that I had to look after you so carefully. I wanted to look after you carefully; I wanted to hold you forever and never let you go.

I love it, cause it was like.. boysex, but then it had heart to it too!

so it was like... a double oneshot, sex and fluff!

yay!

amazing! i've already read this on fandomination

awwww it had eveything
two fit guys
emotion
and sex :)

AWWWHH omg this is mindblowinggggg

gah i love it!! its cute, fluffy, and smexxie as hell

great job =]

-a

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lovely... i agree with mikey: didn't much expect FRank to be much of a 69er myself but whatever. it was really cute

umm... first of all, i'd have to say it was a nice choice of song (i LOVE skillet), it's really beautiful and sad at the same time... but i think the sex scene was a bit much if you applied a song like this to it.... it just didn't seem right. at the very least, i was expecting the confessions of love and mikey asking frank to stay, maybe even a chaste kiss or 2 (given the tenderness of the moment)... but to me it just wasn't realistic for the whole situation for the 2 of them to end up making out and sucking each other off... it was nicely written and an interesting choice on the pairing for this particular song, but the way it ended didn't fit somehow. Sorry, you're free to stalk me if this caused any distress, and no offense was meant, really.

Wow. That was cute, sexy and sweet, all at the same time.
You are so good at writing Frikey's. :)

That was beautiful. You did an amazing job.
I love it. <3

So sweet, so sad and so beautiful.

i love it darling
so much emotion and love.
-xoxo denise

I love it.
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It made me feel so much emotion.
And those are my favorite Frikey's.

xlindsaylullabyx.
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