Aaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! I luved it!!!!
January 1st, 2012 at 09:35am
First off, I'd like to thank you for entering this in my contest as well! I really loved the layout; it was simple but it looked quite elegant at the same time. The only complaint I have is that I would have liked to seen a bit more of a summary of the story but nonetheless. :)
From those first few paragraphs, I was already laughing. I adore the dynamic between the group and just the way you described them all was brilliant. Although I'm not a huge fan of All Time Low, I think you did a good job at capturing their individual personalities. I must admit that I wasn't a huge fan of the all capitals, all bolded section when Jack was screaming but that's more of a personal preference.
The reference to 500 Days of Summer made my night. I absolutely adore that movie in every way; it's brilliant. <3
Although I wasn't a huge fan of the namedropping in that one section, I thought it was quite funny that Alex and Jack enlisted so many people in order to get Zack out of the bathroom. It legitimately seemed like something they would do in real life. Overall, I think you did a great job with this; the characters were so well written and it was quite cute. I noticed a few small mistakes but nothing major; thanks so much for entering this in my contest! :D
